This has some very nice ideas but compositionally it misses the mark for me. There's a very high contrast between backgrounds and foregrounds that leaves a pretty odd impression. I'm particularly referring to the foreground spikes, which really clash with how calculated and patterny the background is, and also combined with the very simple designs just doesn't really go well in my opinion.

There are a few other icks that I'm not really a fan of like the song cuts but I don't think that drags the level down as much as the composition and repetitiveness does. I see some potential here, particularly the particle usage in the backgrounds, but as a level this doesn't really strike me. It's not bad at all though.