➼ “crumbling” (116039807) by roadkiller

↪ Review :

crumbling is a very nice art/modern level with a really nice attention to details especially to vegetations design. In this part every decorated objects is almost perfect. The remote camera and the very large background puts us in a cold and lost in the forest atmosphere. The second part is even simpler but this starry night atmosphere is very well done, I really like the stars made with only the particle editor.

↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :

Since this level is very simple I will only feedbacks and show you how to improve the first part.

First part :

I really like the colors in this part and the cold atmosphere. But I think the mountains can have a lot more details especially more reliefs to add more contrast between colors and more details in the design of these mountains. Talking about details I love how much time you probably spent on these vegetations, this is absolutely very well made and I really like this attention to details.

Here is how you can improve this part :

• By adding some little cliff to your mountains this will add more details and more realism to these mountains.
  
  

(Note : This feedback is meant to help, I'm sorry if it seems rude, but it's not !)

Very little review this time. This level has some insane potential ! Keep it up !

The ending is one of the best parts of this actually. I cant wait for roadkiller to get more comfortable and even bolder in the editor cause this and his previous levels show huge promise