➼ “M121d0” (118481154) by N0XTRY

↪ Review :

M121d0 is a very simplistic and monochrome modern level. This level has very dark and cold ambiance, it’s very special for a modern level. Every part of this level looks the same sadly but for a simplistic level I think it’s nice to have some really simple design even if I think it would be better with a bit more details and colors overall, while maintaining the simplistic aspect.

↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :

This level is very simple and there is the same type of decoration, so I will only show how to improve the 2 first one.

First part :

As I said in the review tab this level is just a very simplistic monochrome level. But, with a lot more colors and details you can add a lot of quality and life to a level while leaving it simple. For a modern level this is a very sad level and the very quiet music does not help at all to have a colorful and cheerful atmosphere.

Here is how you can improve this part :

• By adding some lighter colors and a white outline you can definitely make this level more colorful and less sad.

• Take the idea of shadows but turn them into a streetlight to add more details. The streetlights are some simple cartoonish clipart found on Freepik.

• Adding some big clouds to the sky background will definitely remove this sad and scary aspects from this part. (Clouds are made by “wiynlol” on the Object Workshop Geode mod).
  
  

Second part :

This part is probably simplest than the first one, it feels really rushed and with the darker colors it’s probably hard to read the gameplay, this part need more details in the blocks design and a more brightness.

Here is how you can improve this part :

• By adding a white outline with some grey glow you can make a very nice “neon” effect and this will definitely add a better “evening” atmosphere.

• For the shadows adding another version of the streetlights will add more diversity in the designs.

• For the background the same clouds and with a darker color.
  
  

(Note : This feedback is meant to help, I'm sorry if it seems rude, but it's not !)

This level has some insane potential ! Keep it up !