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➼ “M121d0” (118481154) by N0XTRY
↪ Review :
M121d0 is a very simplistic and monochrome modern level. This level has very dark and cold ambiance, it’s very special for a modern level. Every part of this level looks the same sadly but for a simplistic level I think it’s nice to have some really simple design even if I think it would be better with a bit more details and colors overall, while maintaining the simplistic aspect.
↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :
This level is very simple and there is the same type of decoration, so I will only show how to improve the 2 first one.
First part :
As I said in the review tab this level is just a very simplistic monochrome level. But, with a lot more colors and details you can add a lot of quality and life to a level while leaving it simple. For a modern level this is a very sad level and the very quiet music does not help at all to have a colorful and cheerful atmosphere.
Here is how you can improve this part :
By adding some lighter colors and a white outline you can definitely make this level more colorful and less sad.
Take the idea of shadows but turn them into a streetlight to add more details. The streetlights are some simple cartoonish clipart found on Freepik.
Adding some big clouds to the sky background will definitely remove this sad and scary aspects from this part. (Clouds are made by “wiynlol” on the Object Workshop Geode mod).
Second part :
This part is probably simplest than the first one, it feels really rushed and with the darker colors it’s probably hard to read the gameplay, this part need more details in the blocks design and a more brightness.
Here is how you can improve this part :
By adding a white outline with some grey glow you can make a very nice “neon” effect and this will definitely add a better “evening” atmosphere.
For the shadows adding another version of the streetlights will add more diversity in the designs.
For the background the same clouds and with a darker color.
(Note : This feedback is meant to help, I'm sorry if it seems rude, but it's not !)
This level has some insane potential ! Keep it up !
➼ “Prism Gallery” (118126505) by AlternativeBoi
↪ Review :
Prism Gallery is a very cool modern level. The colors are very cool, I really appreciate these pastels colors. The decoration is very good, this blocks design with this pretty cool “prisms” are well made and I really like how it goes. But the decoration of the last part is not that great. Sadly, it feels very rushed because it lacks decoration and it’s pretty sad. This level has really big potential, I really think you need to work more on the last part. Adding more details and some better colors placement will help a lot !
↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :
First part :
This is the most beautiful and the most worked part of the level, the ambiance of this part is insane and I love how this part really fit the theme “prism” well. Unfortunately in the blocks design there is no shadows so it’s pretty hard to see this “perspective effect”. The background is also too invisible and it’s really hard to see the spikes sadly.
Here is how you can improve this part :
By increasing the background opacity it will add more details to the background and it will be less empty.
Adding an outline to the spikes will add more visibility.
By adding some glow to make some perspective effects on the blocks design this will create a really cool perspective effect and definitely add a lot more details in this blocks design.
Second part :
This is the last part of the level, this part has some very interesting designs and colors but sadly this parts feels a lot rushed. For some reason the background have the same colors as the blocks design it makes the gameplay very hard to learn. Speaking of the blocks design it’s really unfortunate that this blocks design is really simple and at the center there is no objects at all, the spikes are also too simple and more details could be added !
Here is how you can improve this part :
By completing the center of the blocks design with some glow and lines, this will add less emptiness to the level.
Adding an outline on the spikes will add more colors to this part.
Increasing the opacity of the background elements will add more colors to this monochrome part.
(Note : This feedback is meant to help, I'm sorry if it seems rude, but it's not !)
This level has some insane potential ! Keep it up !
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sorry about this gang