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➼ “crumbling” (116039807) by roadkiller
↪ Review :
crumbling is a very nice art/modern level with a really nice attention to details especially to vegetations design. In this part every decorated objects is almost perfect. The remote camera and the very large background puts us in a cold and lost in the forest atmosphere. The second part is even simpler but this starry night atmosphere is very well done, I really like the stars made with only the particle editor.
↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :
Since this level is very simple I will only feedbacks and show you how to improve the first part.
First part :
I really like the colors in this part and the cold atmosphere. But I think the mountains can have a lot more details especially more reliefs to add more contrast between colors and more details in the design of these mountains. Talking about details I love how much time you probably spent on these vegetations, this is absolutely very well made and I really like this attention to details.
Here is how you can improve this part :
By adding some little cliff to your mountains this will add more details and more realism to these mountains.
(Note : This feedback is meant to help, I'm sorry if it seems rude, but it's not !)
Very little review this time. This level has some insane potential ! Keep it up !
➼ “Formality” (107100853) by Wutaby
↪ Review :
Formality is a very cool modern stylish level. This level has a really simple gameplay but the gameplay is fun ! I really like the decoration but it’s really unfortunate that there are not really more details in some parts. For example in the second part the blocks design isn’t really finished. I think extending the grey blocks and yellow lines would make it a lot better. The gameplay is really fun and I really enjoyed playing it !
↪ Some feedbacks and how this level can be improved :
↪ As I said above, this level is very simple in terms of decoration and some of the designs are too simplistics.
First part :
The first part of this level has some really great color combinations, I really like the structure of this part. It's really unique for a ship part. Even if in terms of gameplay I am not a really big fan of the 3D structures that are sometimes inside the structures, I think these 3D structures are pretty messy and don’t really fit the actual design of the base structures.
By adding more details to the sawblades, ground spikes and arrows for example a pretty simple gradient it would add more variety to the level.
By modifying the blocks design with a better design it would be better, the base design if not that great I don’t think these vertical lines are great and it can be improved a lot !
Second part :
The second part is really simple in terms of decoration and gameplay. The structures are really simple. But I like the simplicity of the decoration and it’s really sad that the design doesn't really cover the whole structure because this can be really better !
Extending the design to the whole structure will definitely make this part really nice.
Third part :
The third part is my favorite part, the gameplay, the colors, and the decorations are really cool ! A bit simple and I think they can be improved a little bit, Like the background some details can be added to make it more elaborate.
Adding a gradient on the sawblades, it would add more variety to the level.
By adding some yellow line on the blocks design, iit would be more elaborate and it will add a better finish touch.
Adding more details in the background like some gradient, it would make it less empty.
↪ The others part are really great and I don’t think they need to be improved, the effects are great and the gameplay is also very good !
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sorry about this gang